Notes for Mr T
As I said below, I could have nominalised everything, so I did. My word count is now 1,317 so is significantly less. However I still have not written a conclusion or included case studies. The conclusion should be 150 words at minimum, this doesn't leave much room for the Case Studies. Should I not include them and just give more examples in the actual article, making use of the remaining word count?
Your opinions would be much appreciated!
Notes for Mr T
This outcome exceeds the word limit my approximately 53 words. The "What is Film Scoring" section takes up 509 words.
I am thinking the introduction may be too long, so could be nominalised. This also goes for the very wordy "What is FIlm Scoring" section.
In fact, it goes for the whole thing.
In your opinion, is there anything that I could take out or make less of? If I nominalise it should cut down the word count significantly, but taking out something may be useful. I may be able to write the "What is Film Scoring" section as more of a dot point thing with some diagrams. Would this be better?
This draft does not include Case Studies or a conclusion due to the word limit. However, are Case Studies entirely necessary? If I am struggling for words would I be able to include the information in the Case Studies in table form or in the rest of the article, giving examples of everything? After a read through of this draft and discovering what I need to change, I will change and include Case Studies if they are necessary, however will definitely include a conclusion.
Outcome Draft III.docx
- 16/06/2011: 8:50PM
Outcome Draft II - nominalised.docx
- 8/06/2011: 12:58AM
Notes for Mr T
As I said below, I could have nominalised everything, so I did. My word count is now 1,317 so is significantly less. However I still have not written a conclusion or included case studies. The conclusion should be 150 words at minimum, this doesn't leave much room for the Case Studies. Should I not include them and just give more examples in the actual article, making use of the remaining word count?
Your opinions would be much appreciated!
Thanks again.
Outcome Draft II.docx
- 8/06/2011: 11:43AM
Notes for Mr T
This outcome exceeds the word limit my approximately 53 words. The "What is Film Scoring" section takes up 509 words.
I am thinking the introduction may be too long, so could be nominalised. This also goes for the very wordy "What is FIlm Scoring" section.
In fact, it goes for the whole thing.
In your opinion, is there anything that I could take out or make less of? If I nominalise it should cut down the word count significantly, but taking out something may be useful. I may be able to write the "What is Film Scoring" section as more of a dot point thing with some diagrams. Would this be better?
This draft does not include Case Studies or a conclusion due to the word limit. However, are Case Studies entirely necessary? If I am struggling for words would I be able to include the information in the Case Studies in table form or in the rest of the article, giving examples of everything? After a read through of this draft and discovering what I need to change, I will change and include Case Studies if they are necessary, however will definitely include a conclusion.
Thanks!